"Let's visit to night that corner abandoned whispering warehouse as at night for fun!"
Proposed the young man with a great zeal.
"Why all that trouble? We'll relax comfortably in our place watching our favorite TV program!"
Suggested his friend coolly.
"It's going to be a real thrill. What's the point in staying at home watching the stereotyped TV Programs? Let's do something different for a while!"
"It's going to be a real thrill. What's the point in staying at home watching the stereotyped TV Programs? Let's do something different for a while!"
Said the young man.
"There's no watchman too there. The earlier man had abandoned the place long back. Why to go to such place where none ventures? I'm scared!"
"There's no watchman too there. The earlier man had abandoned the place long back. Why to go to such place where none ventures? I'm scared!"
Said the friend.
"Hi! Come on.. Once in away, we should actively involve in such things.. Otherwise, what's the meaning to our life?"
"Hi! Come on.. Once in away, we should actively involve in such things.. Otherwise, what's the meaning to our life?"
Pulled on the young man.
There was no go for the friend. After dinner that night, they both ventured out by foot towards the so called abandoned warehouse along with 2 good torches. As they neared the building they noticed that..
The front doors of the huge 2 storied house were removed long back as the owner of the house himself had abandoned the place for a while due some bad luck that happened to him and after that none ventured to look at that..
The floor was full of dirt, dry leaves and stones and the dry leaves made lots of creaking sounds as the duo went round. The roofs of the rooms were full of hanging cob webs and at certain places the same simply landed on them totally covering them up with simultaneous constant creaking sounds made by creatures around. The young men thus moved around the place for about an hr, had gone on to the roof over a narrow staircase and spent some time there looking at the dark sky..
Suddenly a soft thing fell on the second man from top and it appeared suddenly that
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There was no go for the friend. After dinner that night, they both ventured out by foot towards the so called abandoned warehouse along with 2 good torches. As they neared the building they noticed that..
The front doors of the huge 2 storied house were removed long back as the owner of the house himself had abandoned the place for a while due some bad luck that happened to him and after that none ventured to look at that..
The floor was full of dirt, dry leaves and stones and the dry leaves made lots of creaking sounds as the duo went round. The roofs of the rooms were full of hanging cob webs and at certain places the same simply landed on them totally covering them up with simultaneous constant creaking sounds made by creatures around. The young men thus moved around the place for about an hr, had gone on to the roof over a narrow staircase and spent some time there looking at the dark sky..
Suddenly a soft thing fell on the second man from top and it appeared suddenly that
The house seemed whispered,
Making the man scream aloud saying
'God.. I'm caught!'
Who instantly ran out of the house, reached his place the fastest and firmly bolted the door from inside of his home sweating profusely and his heart pounding hard..
The first friend carefully looked around, picked up a torn over coat that accidentally descended on his friend from a hanging position on the top due to wind which made the whispering sound all along and having noted that fact continued his further activity with all calmness..
The first friend carefully looked around, picked up a torn over coat that accidentally descended on his friend from a hanging position on the top due to wind which made the whispering sound all along and having noted that fact continued his further activity with all calmness..
- Soon the first young man made a rough sketch of the plan of the building noting down type of the floor, size of the rooms, types of internal doors, sills, walls etc and thus himself got into a totally serious activity of declaring aloud to the world that he alone personally made all that survey thru' a dedicated search..
- From that night he lived thru' a man of great strength within knowing fully well that the abandoned whispering warehouse is just another building and if fully renovated and majority of community around got cleared of the wrong belief that entered their minds..
- The second young man who was forcibly pulled in, moved with desperate feeling at the back of the hanging cobwebs seen as bad omen, the whispering sounds out of wind blowing over the dry leaves heard as the devil moving around, climbing thru' the twisted suitcase felt as a nightmare of being caught in a narrow passage and the moonless night looking totally threatening, soon reached a collapsing stage having run out of his energies all along with a single thought in his mind..
- And soon he firmed up within not to think and talk of that, go near to that as well as similar buildings for life time!
There was Message from Above..
'I provided
One Enquiry Spirit
Equally in all to establish
Truth
And live in
Peace..
One who makes use of it
In the
Right Way
Alone
Lives life full;
None else!
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Impressive and nicely presented.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyotirmoy.. A nice Comment here!
Deletevery true words. An enquiring spirit rests not until it finds an answer. I enjoyed your enlightening thriller.
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