Sunday, December 6, 2015

THE SURPRISE IN STORE!

He was the boy who had just entered the twin digit age.. Too straightforward, inquisitive and experimental in nature and ever ready to learn the 'Right' alone.. 

His Mom said, 

“Go to the Temple, Pray to God and come back.. The Almighty sure takes care of you!”

Along with that she reminded him of all the procedures to follow there..

The boy was too enthusiastic.. And he believed his Mom a total one hundred percent there..


Accordingly, he went to the Temple and exactly did what his Mom told him but for the final ringing the bell, he had to jump and do that as he could not reach that height..

That way, he did it twice but when he was jumping the 3rd time, he was harshly told by the Authorities to go away from there and not to jump and cause nuisance in the Premises.. 


Leaving the young mind totally confused and tensed up for a while where he believed beyond!

He got a lower Grade in one of the Subjects of his Half yearly Exams which earlier he claimed at home having answered the best..

The Mom sent his elder brother to the Institute to enquire about the low marks..
There, the elder brother quickly found that his brother had wrongly assessed his own marks as the scoring given appeared right only when the same was showed and explained to him by the Authorities with a vengeance and hurt feeling in their minds for pointing out unnecessarily.. The hurt continued, the anger was no less and when the boy not knowing all that was actively playing inside in the Compound area, the washed waters of lunch box were thrown on him as if the boy was unnoticed..

Leaving the young mind totally confused and tensed up for a while where he believed beyond!

He was interacting with the best friend of his father who even though appeared the best man was expecting a favor from his dad.. When the dad did not yield there and followed the right procedure, the man who appeared as dear friend till then turned too hostile and as he could never do anything to the dad, showed his wrath and pent up emotions in front of the boy scolding him and his dad beyond the limits.. 

Leaving the young mind totally confused and tensed up for a while where he believed beyond!

The boy was travelling.. They were waiting for the transport at the Central Area around 8 PM.. Meanwhile the boy had to attend to the Nature’s Call.. He told his Mom and walked a little away towards the bushes on the side.. When he reached there, the tall heavy built man guarding the area suddenly caught him and asked him to follow him.. The boy was in total tears in front of the hefty Guard who made him walk some distance away from the place where his Mom and dad were waiting, took him to a Corner when the boy's heart beat increased beyond the limit and straight away showed him a well illuminated clean place marked as 'Public Bath Rooms,' gently guided him to use the place and advised him never get into the habit of dirtying the Open Areas.. 

Leaving the young mind totally astonished and relaxed for a while where he feared beyond!

12 comments:

  1. Indeed, thats a great surprise to see the kids grow step-by-step and achievement after achievement. And it feels superb to get the view all of that lovely phases live :) A lovely post.

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    1. Thanks Tara! Happy to such a nice Comment on this Post!

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  2. So glad for him that he found an 'illuminated ' clean place ... Powerfully presented sir with various incidents making him doubt , learn , get impressed by, grow and finally believe again :)

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    1. Thanks Kokila! The right expressive comment on the Post!

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  3. Oh! I was relieved at the end! I was worried for the little boy that some danger might be lurking from somewhere. Glad that he found a "tidy, clean'' place... :-)

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    1. A note worthy comment here on learning! Thanks a lot, Maniparna!

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    1. Thanks Archana for leaving such appreciative Comment on the Post!

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  5. Pheww! So relieved with the climax! You almost scared me :)
    How beautifully woven!

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    1. Thank you Leena for appreciating the climax part of it! It's all part of learning thru' life!

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    1. Thanks Somali.. Happy to hear that from Top Bloggers like you!

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