Saturday, February 6, 2016

MY TWIN.. MY SAVIOR!

As the moon casts its glow on the desert sands an ancient caravan appeared from mist,

And a stranger from caravan, who just looked like my mirror image emerged and straight walked towards me. That moment looked like another big nuisance in front of me as I was all the day running round with my unending problems..

"No.. No.. Not at all.. How can some one at this stage of my life, suddenly appear in front and start digging into my past life saying that.......? Surely a big NO!

 Whatever be the past, let that be buried as is.. I don't want any flashback!"

Thus were running my thoughts. But the Stranger seemed never interested in all that, looked straight into my eyes and said,

"I'm not just the twin as you are seeing me here and thinking so but something more than that. I was in front of you many times earlier in your life but all along you were too busy with your activities and never bothered to notice me even once.. 

Today, I'm not leaving you and I want to pour out myself before you in full. You must listen to me!"

Even though I got a bit irritated with the talk, equally I was mesmerized looking at him and in my heart too I noticed a keen interest to know who exactly he was.. 

But outward, I said,

"Dear! Presently I live my life with a certain fullness and dignity. Don't want to know who you are and all that at this stage. Let the past be the past. I don't mind..

 That's sure a happy situation for me. If you say you are really my friend, just help me to get out of some of my present issues. Don't trouble me beyond that!"

"Strange! What type of dignified life is this of yours you are talking of? You are afraid to recognize your own twin and...."

"Please.. Please.. Whatever be, I don't want all that. Can you just help me out?"

"I'm coming to that point only. Since you kept me away all these days and tried to live your life independent of me, you have so many problems with you today. Do you know that?"

"OK! First of all, tell me who you are?"

"I am just the Total Inside of you.. The so called
Conscious, Subconscious, your Physics, your Chemistry etc etc.. I am that Single Entity with you ever craving to hold your hand in your life from the time you are born on this earth..

Recognize me, respect me, feel for me, care for me, never put me down and start living such a life where in we both forever remain friends..

If you start doing this, I promise there would be no problems, only Tasks in your life. That way you are sure going to be the True Winner in this life!"

This post is a part of BlogchatterBlogHop

(The Post was originally written in line with Indispire Prompt of the Week #ImaginativeStory)

Keywords:
TWIN, SAVIOR

16 comments:

  1. lovely one sir :-) made my evening...

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    1. Thanks Archana for such an appreciative Comment.. Thanks too for share of the Post on Google+!

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  2. I like your idea of presenting the inner self as the twin. It takes courage to recognize the existence, and honour the inner self and your post coaxes to do it very inspiringly.

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    1. Thanks Saket for such an appreciative comment.. Your Comment very rightly fits into the Post Message!

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  3. WE often turn our face around when we come face to face with our own selves. A profound message conveyed through the story.

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  4. That's very thoughtful and you have expressed it with ease... Awesome post!

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    1. Oh! That's so nice of you, Meera.. Thanks for such a nice appreciation!

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