The old Post is modified and presented here without altering the basic message conveyed therein to reflect my view on this week's IndiSpire Prompt
"The salvation of this human world lies nowhere else than in the human heart, in the human power to reflect, in human meekness and human responsibility." Vaclav Havel said. Your reflection? #BetterLife
I became conscious of success in my life and thought..
"I was the leading man in my life!"
No flowers were at my door at any time but a beautiful bunch was in front of my neighbor's door daily. My consciousness remarked,
"You may not be aware.. In your success, many around
Volunteered following you without a protest!"
Leaving those thoughts, I thought..
"I was the strong man in my life!"
The story was same with my Consciousness remarking,
"In your success, many around
Were indirectly made weak!"
Leaving those thoughts, I thought..
"I was the brave man in my life!"
The story was same with my Consciousness remarking,
"In your success, many around
Had their own legitimate fears!"
Leaving those thoughts, I thought..
"I was the intelligent man in my life!"
The story was same with my Consciousness remarking,
"In your success, many around
Were not blessed to be so!"
Leaving those thoughts, I thought..
"I was the learned man in my life!"
The story was same with my Consciousness remarking,
"In your success, many around
Had no such chances with them!"
Leaving those thoughts, I thought..
"I was the best man in my life!"
The story was same with my Consciousness remarking,
"In your success, many around
Were not allowed to express so!"
Leaving those thoughts, I thought..
"I was the wise man in my life!"
The story was same with my Consciousness remarking,
"In your success, many around
Happened to be of adjusting type!"
Leaving those thoughts, I thought..
"I was the useful man in my life!"
The story was same with my Consciousness remarking,
"In your success, many around
Were unable to utilize their skills!"
Leaving those thoughts, I thought..
"I was the smart man in my life!"
The story was same with my Consciousness remarking,
"In your success, many around
Were straightforward!"
Leaving those thoughts, I thought..
"I am the successful man in my life!"
The story was same with my Consciousness remarking,
"In your success, many around
Were deprived of those opportunities!"
Feeling helpless, I questioned back,
"How come my neighbor had
Flowers At The Door
Daily and myself not?"
My Consciousness smiled and said,
"All those days, that man
Remained Humble,
Had Consideration for the Other and
Sincerely worked for his/her Improvement
But
You were proud of your achievements alone all along!"
‘This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend,
an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.’
The Post is equally suited for the BlogChatter to #CauseAChatter..
Keywords:
FLOWERS, DOOR
Good thoughts! I like how you present them!
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DeleteA novel way of looking within!
ReplyDeleteThanks Uppalji for the appreciation!
Deletedeep and insightful.
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DeleteAah ! Extra-ordinary post indeed ! I am deeply moved.
ReplyDeleteJitendra Mathur
That's so nice of you to say so Jitendra.. Love the comment! Thanks a lot!
DeleteInspiring and powerful poem !!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Vasantha.. A nice appreciative comment here!
DeleteVery probing lines.
ReplyDeleteThanks Tomichan Matheikal for the appreciation.. Love the comment.. Hope the retired life is smooth and interesting the other way.. Best wishes!
DeleteVery good article.
ReplyDeletekeep it up
Thanks for the appreciation.. Wishes!
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